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Charles Bastille's avatar

In A Course In Miracles, which is a long, difficult to understand tome claimed by its publishers to have been channeled by JC (that God dude) himself (disclaimer: I'm not asking anyone to believe this), JC says that Sigmund Freud is full of shit.

I bring this up not to evangelize, but to point out the obvious. This is not to suggest that family abuse victims (for example) don't carry their history and scars with them. But they don't need to be trapped by them, either. The whole recovery process for these folks requires that to be so.

However, we don't need Freud to tell us about the damage it causes, nor its possible relevance to our character's story.

It's a question of balance. The nature of childhood trauma is in the very title of a Russell Banks novel turned into a movie: "Affliction." But he avoids preaching about it. He lets his story divulge their secrets.

It's really **how** we explore the issues of the past, not *if,* in my opinion. If anything, my writing's weakest aspect is that I often don't go into the past enough.

A character of mine may never stop in the middle of a boxing match to think about what his father once said. But that's more because I try to think about reality, too. He'd be pummelled, yes, but anyone who has been involved in an intense athletic match knows we aren't thinking about what mom or dad said while we're trying to clear a hurdle.

But if I wrote it, you might also never find out that his dad hit him every night, which isn't much better.

Great post, made me think.

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You ask: What if human behavior is motivated more by a person’s genetic makeup?

Yet we know that a genetic mutation which later in life causes harm can leave one man devastated and another a proven victor. But could we believe in the existence of the one who succeeds or the one who failed if we were not given their backstory? We would have to take the author at his word.

At the risk of being preachy: We need a fascinating backstory to overcome our bias. We'll read it if it's fascinating and we won't question what the author implies if he provides it.

You mentioned Henry James, but he never seems to prove what he says (he may be a pleasure to read, but he feels like a poet).

In "Cider House Rules" John Irving provides "story" about the main character's childhood, the creation of his hometown, and how he got his name. These disclosures were studied, but they did not tax the reader's patience. They were practical and done artfully, and they build a foundation for what will come later.

We know they are practical because they fulfill the obligation writers have to create a world in which a main character can do things like get into a fist fight or comfort someone who has been injured.

Books I like to read incorporate backstory into the whole moving structure, making it part of the flow (probably placing most of that backstory in chapter one). And writers who do this are more likely to create something which feels whole and complete.

Yet I think there's a place for stories like those by Henry James. They build a certain skill of making impressionistic images that can be very useful. And the stories themselves have a passion that cannot be easily replicated by the types of novels I often think of as being successful.

I'll have to re-read some of his work.

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